Giúp em sửa lỗi trong thư này với!!!

[Hathuong]

I wish you and your family are happy and good health.
How are you and your job? I know that. Economy of your country are stabilize progressively. When have you plan come to Viet nam? I am very happy if i see you soon.
I hope that. I will drink beer with you one of these days.
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Thanks you for your email. I was very happy when i receive your this email. I still remember you. You bought my boxs and you pay in full for me. At that tiem, you said with me that: Your friend will to come and pick up it. But don't any who to come my shop delivery it. I was still to wait you untill now. I shut your boxs in wood case. And I just wait till I receive your information. Because I have not any informal about you.
Plaese let me know. What will I have to do with them?
I am verry sorry for this problem.
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Isn't who hepl me???

 

[phatnq2002]

Ðề: Giúp em sửa lỗi trong thư này với!!!

I wish you and your family are happy and good health.
How are you and your job? I know that. Economy of your country are stabilize progressively. When have you plan come to Viet nam? I am very happy if i see you soon.
I hope that. I will drink beer with you one of these days.
******
Thanks you for your email. I was very happy when i receive your this email. I still remember you. You bought my boxs and you pay in full for me. At that tiem, you said with me that: Your friend will to come and pick up it. But don't any who to come my shop delivery it. I was still to wait you untill now. I shut your boxs in wood case. And I just wait till I receive your information. Because I have not any informal about you.
Plaese let me know. What will I have to do with them?
I am verry sorry for this problem.
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Isn't who hepl me???

Ủa, sửa là sửa cái gì? What must be corrected?

 

[Hathuong]

Ðề: Giúp em sửa lỗi trong thư này với!!!

Ủa, sửa là sửa cái gì? What must be corrected?

Em sợ sai nên trước khi gửi em nhờ các bậc tiền bối xem lại giúp. Ý em là các pác xem em có chỗ nào sai thì sửa giúp em ấy mà.
Thanks very much.

 

[Gabeo]

Ðề: Giúp em sửa lỗi trong thư này với!!!

Em sợ sai nên trước khi gửi em nhờ các bậc tiền bối xem lại giúp. Ý em là các pác xem em có chỗ nào sai thì sửa giúp em ấy mà.
Thanks very much.

hình như là đúng rồi mà, đọc đi đọc lại

 

[muontennguoi]

Ðề: Giúp em sửa lỗi trong thư này với!!!

I think it will be:

I wish you and your family are happy and good health.
How are you and your job? I know that. Economy of your country are stabilize progressively. When do you plan to Viet nam? I am very happy if i see you soon.
I hope so. I will drink beer with you one of these days.
******
Thanks you for your email. I was very happy when i receive the email. I still remember you. You buy my boxs and you pay me in full. At that time, you have said to me: Your friend will to come and get it. But no one come to my shop for it. I was still waiting for you untill now. I pack up your boxs in wood case. And I just wait until I receive your information. Because I do not have any informal about you.
Plaese let me know. What will I have to do with them?
I am verry sorry for this problem.
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[phuong2701]

Ðề: Giúp em sửa lỗi trong thư này với!!!

I wish you and your family are happy and good health.
How are you and your job? I know that. Economy of your country are stabilize progressively. When do you have plan come to Viet nam? I am very happy if i see you soon.
I hope so. I will drink beer with you one of these days.[/COLOR]
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Thanks you for your email. I was very happy when i receive your email. I still remember you. You bought my boxs and you pay in full for me. At that tiem, you have said with me that: Your friend will come and pick it up. But no one come my shop to delivery it. I still waiting you untill now. I will shut your boxs in wood case. And I just wait untill I receive your information. Because I don't have any informal about you.
please let me know. What will I have to do with them?
I am verry sorry for this problem.
bạn ah,đưa hoặc đón hoặc lấy cái j đi thì phải là "pick sb/sth up" chứ k phải là "pick up sb/sth"
t học cũng k khá t.a lắm,hy vọng là k sửa bài của bạn đúng thành sai

 

[thuyhien]

Ðề: Giúp em sửa lỗi trong thư này với!!!

stablize la dong tu nen khog the di voi tobe o dang nguyen the khong co "to" nhu vay dau. ở dây ban phai dung tinh tu. ma tinh tu cua stablize la stable. ma nghe thu tieng anh cua ban la tu dich tu tieng viet ra dung khong? nghe khong co van phong anh lam!!!!!!!!
ma
Thanks you for your email. I was very happy when i receive your email. I still remember you. You bought my boxs and you pay in full for me. At that tiem, you have said with me that: Your friend will come and pick it up. But no one come my shop to delivery it. I still waiting you untill now. I will shut your boxs in wood case. And I just wait untill I receive your information. Because I don't have any informal about you.
please let me know. What will I have to do with them?
I am verry sorry for this problem.
thì của các động từ ở đây sai hết rồi
ban phai chia quá khứ với động từ mà mình bôi đỏ ấy, còn những chỗ bạn chia ở tương lai thì bạn phải dùng thì tương lai trong quá khứ Would+verb.còn riêng chỗ informal, đây la tinh từ, chỗ này bạn phải dung danh từ=>information
hết chưa nhỉ????
ban co can minh gui cho mot ban hoan chinh khong?
giai thich the nay ban co hieu hơn khong?minh la minh cu thich sua cho nhung phai giai thich tai sao lai sua nhu the cơ!khong thich sua xong nhung minh chang biet tai sao lai sai!!!heeee

 

[phuong2701]

Ðề: Giúp em sửa lỗi trong thư này với!!!

stablize la dong tu nen khog the di voi tobe o dang nguyen the khong co "to" nhu vay dau. ở dây ban phai dung tinh tu. ma tinh tu cua stablize la stable. ma nghe thu tieng anh cua ban la tu dich tu tieng viet ra dung khong? nghe khong co van phong anh lam!!!!!!!!
ma
Thanks you for your email. I was very happy when i receive your email. I still remember you. You bought my boxs and you pay in full for me. At that tiem, you have said with me that: Your friend will come and pick it up. But no one come my shop to delivery it. I still waiting you untill now. I will shut your boxs in wood case. And I just wait untill I receive your information. Because I don't have any informal about you.
please let me know. What will I have to do with them?
I am verry sorry for this problem.
thì của các động từ ở đây sai hết rồi
ban phai chia quá khứ với động từ mà mình bôi đỏ ấy, còn những chỗ bạn chia ở tương lai thì bạn phải dùng thì tương lai trong quá khứ Would+verb.còn riêng chỗ informal, đây la tinh từ, chỗ này bạn phải dung danh từ=>information
hết chưa nhỉ????
ban co can minh gui cho mot ban hoan chinh khong?
giai thich the nay ban co hieu hơn khong?minh la minh cu thich sua cho nhung phai giai thich tai sao lai sua nhu the cơ!khong thich sua xong nhung minh chang biet tai sao lai sai!!!heeee

ss ơi,gửi cho em đoạn hoàn chỉnh với giải thích với đc k hả ss?

 

[thuyhien]

Ðề: Giúp em sửa lỗi trong thư này với!!!

thank for your email. i'm very happy when i recieved your email. i still remember u. u bought my boxes and u paid in full for me. at that time, u said to me "my friend will come and pick them up". i put them in wood case.but no one came my shop to take them away.
i 'm looking forward to hearing from u soon.
thanks for your email=> thanks khong co tan ngu dau
box kêt thuc bang x nen so nhieu phai them es, cung nhu sh, ch,o...
""thi ban co the cite nguyen van cau noi, va chia luon o thi hien tai,de hon nhieu, han ban da nghe ve câu trực tiếp, câu gián tiếp. câu i 'm looking forward to hearing from u soon. rât hay xuat hiện trong thu tieng anh. no mang phong cach anh ma
ban co the tham khao cach viet thu thuong mai tieng anh (bussiness letter) tại
http://www.write101.com/businessletter.htm
chuc hoc gioi
neu co gi sai hay comment lai cho minh ngay nhé!thanks
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doan minh khong them cua ban,And I just wait untill I receive your information. Because I don't have any informal about you.
please let me know. What will I have to do with them? minh bo no di vi nghe no khong formal lắm, ban nghi gi viet nay dungkhong, neu khong hoc qua cung vay thoi. minh cung vay ma, neu khong doc thi minh cung vay, theo thoi quen thoi.hee, than ái

 

[yumi]

Ðề: Giúp em sửa lỗi trong thư này với!!!

Dear 4 mắt, mình không rõ 2 bức thư có liên quan gì đến nhau hay không, vì vậy mình đã soạn lại thư theo những nội dung cơ bản mình nắm được từ 2 bức thư của bạn. Bạn tham khảo nhé. Chúc may mắn

Dear ABC,

How are you and how is your job going? I am very happy to learn that your country’s economy is getting progressively stable.

If you plan to come to Vietnam, please don’t forget to contact me because I would like to invite you for a drink.

Wish you and your family happy and healthy.

Hope to see you soon.

Ha Thuong

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Dear CDE

It is very happy to receive your email. For sure I still remember you. You are the person who bought the boxes at my shop and paid it in full. At that time, you told that your friend would come and pick them up. However, still now no one has come to get it.

I have packed the boxes in the wooden case and wait for you information. Could you please let me know what to do with them?

I am really sorry for the inconvenience and look forward to hearing from you soon.

Best regards,
Meo4mat

 

[Hathuong]

Ðề: Giúp em sửa lỗi trong thư này với!!!

Dear 4 mắt, mình không rõ 2 bức thư có liên quan gì đến nhau hay không, vì vậy mình đã soạn lại thư theo những nội dung cơ bản mình nắm được từ 2 bức thư của bạn. Bạn tham khảo nhé. Chúc may mắn

Dear ABC,

How are you and how is your job going? I am very happy to learn that your country’s economy is getting progressively stable.

If you plan to come to Vietnam, please don’t forget to contact me because I would like to invite you for a drink.

Wish you and your family happy and healthy.

Hope to see you soon.

Ha Thuong

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Dear CDE

It is very happy to receive your email. For sure I still remember you. You are the person who bought the boxes at my shop and paid it in full. At that time, you told that your friend would come and pick them up. However, still now no one has come to get it.

I have packed the boxes in the wooden case and wait for you information. Could you please let me know what to do with them?

I am really sorry for the inconvenience and look forward to hearing from you soon.

Best regards,
Meo4mat

Cảm ơn bạn nhiều nha.Tôi thấy đọc thư bạn viết hay và dễ hiểu nữa. Giá gần bạn nhờ bạn bổ sung thêm kiến thức EL dở ẹc của tui.
Thanks.